Newspaper Advisor
Feedback English Literature
"Needs color coding, needs seperate pages, also longer articles, add them articles cuh. Also your homepage looks like a Roblox character."
-Parma Tam
"Oh my goodness, Allen. Change Article 1 to "What is English?" This is not English! *Points to Ancient Mythology* also you spelled Ancient wrong! (week later: You still spelled ancient wrong!)"
-Tyrus Chan
"Your website looks as bad as my fathers cooking. Jk jk, its ok"
-Aiden Sun
"So short articles, add more picture and words on homepage of English Literature too big."
-Ms. Leung
1. Color is a little single might not attract reader interest (want black grey or brown)
2. Watching for long time make reader bored
3. Quality image not good
4. Image need more interestingImage is too boring and need better quality
5. Size is too small for image
6. Position of image in article 1 should be changed
7. Some images are not aligned, do not have enough white space/too cramped
8. Article 3 is too close to each other
9. There is a slight difference in spacing not consistent
10. More space between subheading and the paragraph
11. Scale not same in paragraphs
12. Some of them not aligned
13. Articles some too long can divide into smaller paragraphs for readers read faster
14. Spacing problem text and imagine exchange position
Kingsley Wu Presentation feedback for Allen
Feedback for Allen by Jasmine
Navigation is clear for going back to original page, however needs navigation for the rest of the pages in English. A rating I would give for navigating out of five would three out of five because I like how It is very visible and bold but still needs rest of navigation.Visual design in this subject has little to no visuals meaning can include way more detail especially with pictures, that way the audience can get a better supporting idea of what the topic is talking about. Rating would be 2.5/5.Content text is mainly very bold and super easy to read which is great but needs more information and seems inconsistent which leads my rating to be 3/5Some pages have little memes in the corner which in my opinion should be taken off because I feel like the website should be focused on and not adding anything unnecessary.Seems incomplete based on how short the information is. Should have different columns included as well which leads my rating at 2/5
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Feedback I gave others
Feedback for Jasmine:
I like how you added buttons for next page on every page, which is convenient. The Key Concepts page could have more pictures maybe, words are very clean, easy to read, not using very hard words so most readers should be able to understand. I would like a button that would take me to the page before so it’s more convenient, though it is already very convenient that it has a next page button.
Navigation - 10/10
Visual Design 9.5/10 Could add more non-monotone colours
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Content - 10/10 I like the easy words, is easy to read for people who have bad English (including me)
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Web Friendliness - 10/10 Very friendly towards all kinds of people
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Interaction - 8/10 Pretty interactive, could have a little more decorations
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Information Accessibility - 10/10 All Information is super accessible to every reader, super easy to find the information you’re trying to look for
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Ability to Know and Understand - 10/10 All words are super easy to understand, very clean, and not hard to read
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Branding - idk 🤷🤷🤷
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Turnaround Time - 9.7/10 It took very short amount of time to find all the pages I needed to find (English Literature)
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Changing and providing update services - 10/10 Her website is saved and published everyday and updated everyday
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-Allen Liu
To Parma Tam
"I have nothing to say"
-Allen Liu